Hi Taoro it is Cooper from Karoro School. I really enjoyed reading your writing.I like how you included the characters,the setting and how you described the the charter and I also enjoyed the problem in the story maybe next time you could add some descriptive language. Thanks for sharing your work.
Hi Taoro it is Cooper from Karoro School. I really enjoyed reading your writing.I like how you included the characters,the setting and how you described the the charter and I also enjoyed the problem in the story maybe next time you could add some descriptive language. Thanks for sharing your work.
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